Incorrect: You just received daily event reward!
Should read: You just received
a daily event reward!
Incorrect: Locks Twilight's soul when she die.
Correct: Locks Twilight's soul when she
dies.
Incorrect: It all because of the war.
Correct:
It's all because of the war.
Should be "This fishing spot
contains..." "This rock
contains..." and "this book
contains..." respectively.
I'll explain this one further since this seems to be a common grammatical error you make.
Contains is correct: "This rock contains 3 resources"
Contain is correct "These rocks contain 3 resources"
Contains is correct: "This book contains information"
Contain is correct: "These books contain information"
By the way darkky, if you don't mind me asking, what country are you from? Somewhere in eastern Europe?